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The dreaded slushpile, the one place each of us hopes our writing never lands. 


I found this interesting article a long while back on the Guide to Literary Agents blog, a once excellent writing resource, and one of the few blogs that I subscribed to. The topic was Agents and the Slushpile: Ten Reasons they Stop Reading, and I thought I'd share it with you.



Here are the top 10:

10. Overdone description that doesn’t move the story forward
9. Spoon-feeding the reader what the character is thinking
8. Having the characters address each other repeatedly by name, as in, “John, let’s go!”
7. Introducing a character with first and last name, as in, “John Smith entered the room.”
6. Beginning a story with dialogue
5. Opening with a cliché
4. Yanking the reader out of the action with backstory
3. Not giving the reader a sense of place or where the story is going
2. Characters are MIA until bottom of page 2
1. Telling instead of showing

Lots of these are items we've discussed in our Ten -Point Revision Strategy. Lots of great points we need to keep our eyes on.

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